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Postby xblack-catx458 » Sat Feb 27, 2010 10:32 am

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Base by : http://jillianne.deviantart.com/

and the complete full body....
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This is my portrait for MDI Philippines, I have supplied you with the full body doll so you have a better idea of what it will look like.
If you spot any issues it would be wonderful if you could point them out.
Thanks for all the help so far,
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Postby Tiger » Sat Feb 27, 2010 10:51 am

I think it would look better if the pattern moved with the fabric
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And the way you shaded the sternoblah muscle (the lines on the neck) implies that the shoulders are turned to the left, which they're not. Since the portrait is dead-on straight, they should be symetrical in shape (not in shading, though).

It's looking really great and very pinay :mrgreen:
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Postby Dee » Sat Feb 27, 2010 2:32 pm

the portrait's hair is so preeeetty!
here eyes look a bit off though, one is looking to the doll's left and the other is looking straight at us.

and tiger's right about the sternocleidomastoid. (phew!)
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Postby xblack-catx458 » Sat Feb 27, 2010 7:54 pm

I tried to fix the eyes and the sternocleidomastoid (I love copy paste.).
Thank you for your suggestions, if you (or anyone else for that matter) have any more comments they would be greatly appreciated.
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Postby PixelBug » Mon Mar 08, 2010 12:44 pm

I love it so far :) .

The blue on the vest is a bit too bright, though. It'd look great if it was a bit muted, it would go especially well with the shirt (which looks awesome, btw) then.
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