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Post by xblack-catx458 » Sun Apr 04, 2010 10:10 pm

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Any suggestions would be great, this is my first time really pixel-ing (besides an unfinished elf) so I really don't know what I am doing.
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Post by aerieyena » Sun Apr 04, 2010 10:21 pm

For your first time, this is incredible.
The shading needs more contrast, some areas almost looks unshaded since the shading is so light. The arm also looks very thin.

Can't wait to see it finished.
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Post by xblack-catx458 » Sat Apr 10, 2010 2:28 pm

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I added contrast and red-ish highlights on the side.

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Post by Sissors » Sun Apr 11, 2010 11:45 am

The pants could use more contrast, as well as the boots.
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Post by Damnliza » Sun Apr 11, 2010 12:34 pm

Amazing. I would add a few lose strands of hair.
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Post by Ellore » Thu Apr 15, 2010 11:45 pm

This is seriously fantastic so far. Only suggestions would be, as said above, maybe add a few strands of hair...the hair looks a little too perfect to be real, you know? Also, maybe pull a few reference images for the pants...maybe you already were, but something looks really odd to me about the folds right above her knees...

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Post by xblack-catx458 » Sun Apr 18, 2010 3:25 pm

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Is that what you mean by loose hair strands?

I know what you mean by the oddness of the folds above the knee, but I'm not quite sure how to fix that and/or add more folds.

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Post by Penty » Mon Apr 19, 2010 3:12 pm

This is seriously fantastic; I love all the little details. The thing that stands out to me the most right now is the skin, which is very pinky and low-contrast when everything else in the doll is in high-contrast earth tones. Obviously skin isn't the shiniest material out there, but I still think you could darken up the shadows significantly.
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