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Post by WassupKiba » Tue Apr 06, 2010 8:14 pm

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please help! i like this pose (kinda dramatic no?) but the hands/arms ruin it!
the orig picture i did with this pose, her hands were covered with gloves so i hadnt paid much attention to them...well now my lazyness is coming back to bite me in the a$$.

oh, and it you wanna take a stab at the face plz do! (cus everyone knows my faces are WAYYY to anime/fail for the dolling community)

redlines, and c/c are really helpfull! (and the stickfigure next to her is just a pose reference)

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Post by Blu » Tue Apr 06, 2010 8:40 pm

Her torso is WAY too short. It was a lot harder to notice with the doll because of the clothes, but, yeah. D: It's really throwing me off.
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Post by TakenHoney » Tue Apr 06, 2010 8:47 pm

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Her hands are too big, the size of the hands should be above the eyebrows. I'm sorry if it is very messy ^-^; I use my tablet for the red lines. I also drew a quick face on her :). I hope this helps.
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Post by WassupKiba » Wed Apr 07, 2010 8:51 pm

@Blu: lol, yes...the orig reference was a photo of myself and while im tall (5'8") short torsos run in the fam ^_^;;

@Takenhoney: thank you so much!!! would it be alright to use your redlines?

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Post by TakenHoney » Wed Apr 07, 2010 9:16 pm

lol go ahead :)
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Post by WassupKiba » Mon Apr 12, 2010 9:56 pm

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anymore c/c before i start shading?!

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Post by aerieyena » Mon Apr 12, 2010 10:06 pm

Your line work is very messy.

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I circled the areas where the sloppiness was most prominent and redlined the collar bones and armpit areas.
The lower arm looks a bit long, too, imo.
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Post by Helyn » Thu Apr 15, 2010 5:09 am

I would say that both arms are too long. If you picture the doll all straightened out then the hands reach about the knee region. But if you stand up straight then you'll see that your hand starts just past the crotch. It also looks like the wrist on the right is slightly too thin. And maybe the hands are still too big - they look about the size of the forearm, which isn't right.
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