Apoc-Now with round 2!

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Apoc-Now with round 2!

Postby Marleaux » Mon Apr 19, 2010 1:30 pm

So I can't get the faces to match. I wanted wider eyes on the Port but the face structure on the FB from the port. Help/lines/whatever appreciated :D

Also need help with the actual eyes where the colors are.
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Postby OKami_hu » Mon Apr 19, 2010 2:27 pm

The chin on the base looks a bit wider than on the portrait.
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Postby Blu » Mon Apr 19, 2010 3:02 pm

Definitely agree about the chin. Moe tends to have a soft look about her, I think. ... Yes, I'm assuming it's Moe. >> It's from DHF, and you're recently obsessed. <<

The lips on the portrait seem lighter than the full-body. If you can manage it, I'd say soften the eyes on the fb a bit to better match the portrait. Hmm. I can do redlines and paintovers later when I'm at home and if I think it needs it. :P

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Postby Penty » Mon Apr 19, 2010 3:05 pm

The eyes on the portrait are almost rectangular and have a defined angle to them, whereas your edit of the fullbody has rounder eyes without much angle to them. The eyebrows on the portrait are also lower, thicker, and shaped differently.

To smooth out the eyes, you might try using colors other than pure #ffffff white for the highlights, like the portrait does.
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Postby Marleaux » Tue Apr 20, 2010 8:40 pm

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Postby pocamo » Tue Apr 20, 2010 8:51 pm

the portrait seems to have a much more "skinny" face, so you could make the cheeks of the other one smaller.
and the eyes of the portrait are more round than the other base

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Postby Phoenigette » Tue Apr 20, 2010 10:05 pm

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i did something. i work better fiddling on my own than saying what i did before hand.

what i did:
raised the eyebrows one pix.
edited the eyes to be more pointy
edited both noses to match more
softened the chin
made chubbier the cheeks and jaw.
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Postby Marleaux » Tue Apr 20, 2010 10:29 pm

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Postby Sissors » Wed Apr 21, 2010 9:01 pm

She looks a little cross-eyed... And the right eye could be lowered like... one pixel. But that's about it. :)
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Postby Marleaux » Wed Apr 21, 2010 9:42 pm

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Not finished of course. It's for Apoc '10, the example :)
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Postby Marleaux » Wed Apr 21, 2010 11:15 pm

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Postby Marleaux » Thu Apr 22, 2010 5:45 pm

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round 2, :D
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Postby Clare » Fri Apr 23, 2010 11:10 am

I'm intrigued by the outfit on the round two doll! When will apoc be starting up btw?
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Postby Keke » Fri Apr 23, 2010 11:40 am

Marly, seeing these is getting me more and more excited for Apoc this year. I can't wait for it to open next month.

WIP-wise it looks great, her pregnant belly looks great.
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Postby Blu » Fri Apr 23, 2010 12:19 pm

She's pregnant. XD <.< Hehehehe.
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Postby Marleaux » Sat Apr 24, 2010 4:43 pm

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Apoc is End of May \o/

God what is that human shaped blob?! lines for folds?
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Postby Chama » Sat Apr 24, 2010 8:49 pm

Just to start with, I'd try to think of her stomach as a beach ball, so as you're choosing your wrinkles, imagine the lines on a striped beach ball that go around it, wrapping around the sphere. C:
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Postby Marleaux » Sat Apr 24, 2010 9:21 pm

...I had the brilliancy to google Pregnant jumpsuit \o/
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So yeah using that first as a ref right now >>
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Postby Marleaux » Tue Apr 27, 2010 5:03 pm

Fuck that suit >=[
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Postby Keke » Tue Apr 27, 2010 6:40 pm

I like this one much better, than the first one. This one has more personality than the other one.
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Postby Marleaux » Tue Apr 27, 2010 9:29 pm

Thank you Keke! :3

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Postby Keke » Wed Apr 28, 2010 12:39 am

I think she needs to look a little more round and I think her belly needs to be a little higher, maybe a little bit of a rounded crease under her bust. To help with the look of roundness that she's supposed to have. Hopefully, you understand what I'm trying to explain. :wink:
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