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Serious help needed on this base

Post by AmyNatasha » Thu Apr 22, 2010 3:56 am

I really cannot grasp the face. Iv'e put little points where i think the parts of the face need to be. Please help?
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Anything would be a major help
V2..... face need more work
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Post by Rasberry » Thu Apr 22, 2010 5:39 am

ive seen that before...... the pose not the base on DA.....

i will get red lining.
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Post by AmyNatasha » Thu Apr 22, 2010 6:14 am

thanks :) i got really inspired by ballet and acrobats
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Post by Rasberry » Thu Apr 22, 2010 6:32 am

I hope its clear my lines are usually horrible at explaining :)
i also added where i think the light source will hit.
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excuse my horrible lines and lips XD
I think that you should give her boobs ;) and the feet have to be a bit pointy since in the base you created it looks as though her feet and suppose to be robots metal feet the eyes should be a few pixels back and the legs are not really that even the lips aren't really a line and her hands need fingers i didn't really do lines of this because i just noticed now but while holding a pose like that her hands should look as if shes balancing on something maybe you could draw a bench or beams so you can see how it would be like at the moment it looks as though shes about to tilt over and fall :) where i drew light gray scribbles i think that you should maybe add the second lightest color and the white for the lightest dont be afraid to scribble and mess it up :)
wait thats what i do 0.0

i hope you understood if not than maybe i could explain a bit more :) you don't really have to fix anything i said i was just sharing on how i think it should look another one of my tips are go look for gymnast references and try seeing how the antinomy is.
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Post by Rasberry » Thu Apr 22, 2010 6:33 am

the top leg looks so ugly when your not zoomed in.... maybe just make it pointy and look up so tutorials about the hands and leg positions and antimony on DA :)
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Post by AmyNatasha » Thu Apr 22, 2010 6:35 am

Ahha thank you :) youve given me some good ideas! and given her wayyyyy more shape :D
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Post by Rasberry » Thu Apr 22, 2010 6:42 am

That made my day the entire day was like dog poop i dont really make bases and never tried it because i am too lazy another good idea is if you dither the base it would look good. i am glad i helped :)
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Post by AmyNatasha » Thu Apr 22, 2010 9:30 am

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Still can't get the face or smoothness...
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Post by Rasberry » Thu Apr 22, 2010 10:42 am

:)

i tried moving the heads in different angles and fixed a few pixels and edited some things

sorry about the colors being clownish :)

What i fixed-
the boobs looked a little of and looked as though it was flying into the sky. the feet also looked weird so i tried fixing them the yellow circle in the bottom is what i was talking about you just have to do the hands as though they were balancing on it. I will be back :)

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Post by AmyNatasha » Thu Apr 22, 2010 12:07 pm

Ahhhh sissisi i see what you mean!
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Post by Rasberry » Thu Apr 22, 2010 12:14 pm

:)
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Post by Sissors » Sat Apr 24, 2010 12:23 am

Because she's upside-down, gravity would be pulling down on her breasts more. Also, her ear needs to be moved down the top lines up with her eye and the bottom lines up with her mouth. Hope it helps! :)
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