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Post by AmyNatasha » Sun May 09, 2010 2:52 pm

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He is a shapeshifter.
But yeah anyway mainly i need something to make his top stop looking so plain..

any ideas?
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Post by Copen » Sun May 09, 2010 3:19 pm

Maybe add a few rips and maybe a little design on the side of the shirt.

Possible Name:Ritchet or Tay

1st thing that came to mind.

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Post by OKami_hu » Sun May 09, 2010 3:19 pm

Pattern/logo. On the shirt I mean. For a name... Zeal/Zeyal.
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Post by AmyNatasha » Sun May 09, 2010 3:22 pm

Hmmmm i can;t think of a good logo :/ good names though!
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Post by xblack-catx458 » Sun May 09, 2010 3:25 pm

Well, if the blood has leaked through the bandage it most likely has gotten on the shirt a bit. You could also have the little collar thing around the top of the shirt. (The foldy over thing near the neckline)
Sorry if that doesn't make any sense, I'm not exactly familiar with the names of everything.
It's looking great so far, I really love the eyes and how you did the hair.
Nice work!

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Post by AmyNatasha » Sun May 09, 2010 3:41 pm

Ooooo i think i just though of an idea :3
and yeah i should really do the blood coming through onto the shirt :o
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Post by Copen » Sun May 09, 2010 4:41 pm

LOL.I was gonna suggest blood stains,but I didn't knwo if that was just the color on the shirt below or if it was blood xD I got confused.

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Post by Sissors » Sun May 09, 2010 4:50 pm

The shoulders are starting to look a little pillow shaded, but it could be fixed. Also, I would add just a few folds at the bottom of the sleeves to keep them from looking too flat.
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Post by Phoe » Fri May 14, 2010 10:42 am

I'd say the top looks quite pillowy as its just got a zig zag shading down it, if you have some fund with the shrit, a couple of folds where its catching on the trousers, seam over the shoulder where the arms would have been sewn up.

Id suggest adding a lightsource, it looks like a cottonsih type top, so it shouldnt turn out really shiny, but more definition on the shadows would help it alot.

I've done a quick redline, with a possible lightsource to give an idea of how the light and shadow could be

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and a couple of ref's with some really good idea on matirial folds for you

http://www.my-wardrobe.com/sunspel/blac ... tee-890091

http://cdn.my-wardrobe.com/images/produ ... 976368.jpg

http://www.kwestievanlef.nl/pictures/1/ ... ACK-01.jpg

https://nifty-fits.com/Catalog/auq700saq600a_2.jpg
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