Laughing alone with salad

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Laughing alone with salad

Post by 4br4 » Sun Apr 27, 2014 1:03 am

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No salad though, sorry friends

but yeah!
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Re: Laughing alone with salad

Post by Pinstripe » Sun Apr 27, 2014 10:49 am

I said this on DA already, but I'm really liking that nose! I also like the simple shading style you've used.

I do have a couple bits of CC. Mainly, I think the inside of the mouth should be darker, and pinker. Also, I don't think his right (viewer left) ear should be quite so visible when his head is tilted at that angle. Finally, the line around the mouth seems a little too defined; I'd probably shade that outline a bit.

Overall, I think it's a really awesome base with a ton of character. Nice job!
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Re: Laughing alone with salad

Post by Blu » Mon Apr 28, 2014 1:53 am

I am disappointed in the lack of salad like you couldn't imagine. How could you do this to me, srt? :|

But, yeah, that nose and those eyebrows are fantastic.
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Post by 4br4 » Mon Apr 28, 2014 6:27 pm

Pinstripe- Thank you! I appreciate it >w< And, I'll work on the suggestions! I didn't even think of these things haha, I'll work on them, I have like a whole set of these coming hehehehe If I do release them as a set, I'll fix this one up ;w;

Blu- I'm sorry ;A; I'll get around to it eventually lol if anyone has a sketch then I'll do it haha. Maybe I'll get one doodled and toss it in the WIP section? xD And thank you! <3

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Re: Laughing alone with salad

Post by Blu » Mon Apr 28, 2014 8:19 pm

You'd better. :|
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