My first base!

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My first base!

Post by element_wind91 » Sat Jun 20, 2009 12:53 am


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Well, the first base that I'm okay with submitting.
Critique, please!

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~except for franken-dolling, all edits are fine.
~please give me credit if you choose to use this base (www.ramen1991.deviantart.com).
~If you use this base, please show me what you made with it!
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Post by HollywoodReject » Sat Jun 20, 2009 1:04 am

you need to go back and take out the backslash in the first img. it wont show up
base by Hollay glam exclusive.

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Post by Blu » Sat Jun 20, 2009 1:34 am

Aww, that's cute! :>
I'd suggest a more defined jaw/jaw line and more curves to her face so it's not just a straight line. Her hips are forward-facing while her chest is not, and her shoulders are drawn like they are forward facing, but shaded as if they were turned a bit. She really is cute, though. :D I like her tummy and breasts, and her ear is cute. xD Nice palette, too.
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Post by OKami_hu » Sat Jun 20, 2009 9:32 am

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The hand on the hip is still not very good... >>
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Post by element_wind91 » Sat Jun 20, 2009 2:21 pm

Blu:
Thank you! I know, I often draw weird poses like that.

OKami_hu:
^_^; thanks for the edit. I'm no good at drawing hands..
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Post by Goutripe » Wed Jun 24, 2009 11:13 pm

I think the angled face looks kind of cute, actually.

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Post by Ajay » Fri Jun 26, 2009 12:46 pm

I really like the body =) nice pose
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Post by Jade Nornir » Tue Jul 21, 2009 3:25 pm

That's pretty good for your first base! Nice work :]
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Post by PixelingDoodler » Tue Jul 21, 2009 11:48 pm

She is very cute... for your first base you drew and shaded her terrifically

My only critique is the same as Okami's, The jaw is very sqaure, your could make her have a square jaw if you wanted its just this one is a bit too sqaure
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Post by harlequin » Wed Jul 22, 2009 4:55 am

well done for your first base =D

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Post by Freaky8821 » Mon Aug 03, 2009 2:21 am

great will use soon
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Re: My first base!

Post by Poe » Sat Feb 02, 2013 6:56 pm

For a first base that aint bad, in fact that's really cute!

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