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Post by Tals » Mon Jun 24, 2013 11:46 am

THIS BE MAH WIP THREAD. STUFF WILL HAPPEN HERE SOON.

Here's the doll I'm doing though.
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I've got ideas already, just need time and to get on a computer with MS Paint. What sort of computer doesn't have Paint?! This one, apparently.
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Re: BAM

Post by Phoenigette » Mon Jun 24, 2013 2:03 pm

it seems like a crime when computers don't have ms paint, but i find it happens to me frequently

DID YOU ORDER A VIAL TO MATCH TEAM GOLD?! or is that just coincidence? Either way I like your style
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Re: BAM

Post by Tals » Tue Jul 02, 2013 12:20 pm

LOL, nope. I think I've had this vial in my sig for like three years but I did do a happy dance when I saw that they matched \o/

Also, I made progress!
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base is mine, same one I used for the last redoll. TRADITION.

She's a cyborg, so there might be some Gaga-esque happenings going on. But we shall see.
Going to try to get a big chunk of it done today and tomorrow, because after that I probably won't get to work on it again until next week.
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Re: BAM

Post by Tals » Wed Jul 03, 2013 12:24 pm

Moar.
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Actually, I think I'm almost done, but she looks kind of boring. Also thinking of a background maybe.
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Re: BAM

Post by Phoenigette » Wed Jul 03, 2013 1:40 pm

put zebra stripes on her leggings/turtleneck
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Re: BAM

Post by batgirl » Wed Jul 03, 2013 8:25 pm

add some umph to the boots. and maybe some sparkles to the body suit. or rhinestones.
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Post by Kenly » Wed Jul 03, 2013 11:15 pm

glitter/sparkle is always a good idea. maybe add a little bit of a background to one side of her?
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Post by Tals » Thu Jul 11, 2013 11:44 am

once more, with feeling.
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I think I incorporated everyone's suggestions somehow. Is it too much? Too little?
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Re: BAM

Post by Phoenigette » Thu Jul 11, 2013 3:03 pm

I'm noticing a serious lack of zebra stripes.

Otherwise it looks good, very much improved. I think you could do with even more oompf, but you're a far more subtle person than I, so maybe it's fine. One thing I would do is maybe at the top of boots and gloves add a line of something lighter like gold or silver. Right now the bodysuit and boots/gloves are very similar in color and the transition is difficult to see.
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Re: BAM

Post by Tals » Thu Jul 11, 2013 4:23 pm

They're there, I swear! Though, you have to look reeeeeeeeeally close, which isn't a good sign, is it? Dagnabbit. I'll go back and fix them. And the boots too =)

Sometimes I think I'm too subtle, so any help in being not-so subtle is a real help =)
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Re: BAM

Post by Tals » Thu Jul 11, 2013 4:36 pm

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Better, bolder zebra stripes and bling.
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Re: BAM

Post by Phoenigette » Fri Jul 12, 2013 10:52 am

yessssssssss the added bling is very good. Though the zebra stripes sort of overshadow the glitter on her bodypiece. I think it looks good either way, with or without the zebra stripes. \o/
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Re: BAM

Post by KuuKiir » Wed Jul 17, 2013 6:02 pm

Looking great! <3 The added bling and silver details definitely make her look more complete. The little triangle background is nice.. simple but adds a cool touch.
As for zebra stripes, I'd perhaps darken them a small bit. ^.^ Or add a little shading? They're currently one solid color, which makes them look a little flat compared to the lovely shading everywhere else. That's a pretty small nitpick tho'. All in all, she looks very lovely! <3

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