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Let me stand next to your fire

Post by chewbroccoli » Wed Jun 26, 2013 4:50 am

Holding my spot-

Working off of this spot of gorgeousness:
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I am making a super fine film noir femme fatale. The wip is in shambles, look for it at a later date.
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Re: Let me stand next to your fire

Post by Phoenigette » Wed Jun 26, 2013 10:08 am

oh snap I'm excited already
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Re: Let me stand next to your fire

Post by chewbroccoli » Thu Jun 27, 2013 1:50 am

Alrighty. This is really sloppy-
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Re: Let me stand next to your fire

Post by Caitlincaitiecait » Thu Jun 27, 2013 9:04 am

That's going to be sooooo amazing.
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Re: Let me stand next to your fire

Post by Gwen » Thu Jun 27, 2013 11:48 am

This is so lovely so far Chewy, I love the pose and attitude <3
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Re: Let me stand next to your fire

Post by batgirl » Thu Jun 27, 2013 6:50 pm

fuckin' eh. that face omg
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Re: Let me stand next to your fire

Post by chewbroccoli » Tue Jul 02, 2013 12:22 am

Thanks for the comments guys. =]

Alright, I am having trouble with the proportions and general lineart of her bottom half. I want the gown to drape over her legs somehow but I don't know how to make that look good. Also, those fucking hands.
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I'm going to work on it more tonight and tomorrow but then I work six nights in a row so I'm not gonna touch it.
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Re: Let me stand next to your fire

Post by Kenly » Wed Jul 03, 2013 11:17 pm

what if you kind of having it pooling over the front of the chair/couch? i think it'd give it a real fluid look. and i love the hair/face so far!!
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Re: Let me stand next to your fire

Post by chewbroccoli » Thu Jul 04, 2013 10:08 am

I got some much-needed help from a friend who is not participating in the re-doll but is lurking in all the threads. Sooooo there will be more to see soon.
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Re: Let me stand next to your fire

Post by Phoenigette » Fri Jul 05, 2013 4:17 pm

I meant to post a redline but then got stuck on the skirt and gave up.
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Re: Let me stand next to your fire

Post by chewbroccoli » Sat Jul 06, 2013 11:25 am

Alright, I have made significant progress. Now, I must sleep.
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Re: Let me stand next to your fire

Post by Phoenigette » Mon Jul 08, 2013 7:49 pm

she's looking great so far. Her arms and hands look much better
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Re: Let me stand next to your fire

Post by Kenly » Tue Jul 09, 2013 9:35 pm

wow! she's looking great!!
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Post by chewbroccoli » Tue Jul 16, 2013 1:00 am

The deadline is fast approaching.
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Re: Let me stand next to your fire

Post by Caitlincaitiecait » Tue Jul 16, 2013 4:43 pm

You probably already see this, but in case you don't - be careful with the shoe, it looks really blocky around the opening currently. But like I said, that's probably just because it's rough atm. Dress shading placement looks fantastic btw.
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Re: Let me stand next to your fire

Post by batgirl » Tue Jul 16, 2013 6:05 pm

being nit picky here because this is so awesome. I think her upper lip should be fuller/larger. in the original sketch it looked like her mouth was open and the upper lip was larger and I think it suited the proportions of the face better.
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Re: Let me stand next to your fire

Post by chewbroccoli » Wed Jul 17, 2013 5:20 am

Cait - It is still a rough sketch on the shoe, I know it's craptastic.

Bats - I agree on that. I didn't like how the open mouth was going with the shading so I changed it. her lips are a detail I'm gonna go back and perfect some more, if I have the time. And my time is running ouuuuutttt. Dx
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Re: Let me stand next to your fire

Post by Phoenigette » Wed Jul 17, 2013 10:38 am

Before you go in and hard shade the dress, the blocked in highlights for her boobs are a little uneven. The one on our left looks good, it goes about halfway down her boob. The one on our right starts about halfway down her boob onto the underside. Don't know if you saw that already and were going to change it :P

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Re: Let me stand next to your fire

Post by KuuKiir » Wed Jul 17, 2013 6:29 pm

A very ambitious pose! <3 not something I'd probably dare tackle, hehe. You seem to be doing a great job! The way her dress pools/flows around her legs looks very natural thus far.
You've also managed to catch her likeness quite well! ^.^ She does look quite angry/harsh tho'! I think it's her eye/eyebrow that makes her look kind of annoyed. If that's not what you're going for, then perhaps soften her impression a bit.

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Re: Let me stand next to your fire

Post by chewbroccoli » Thu Jul 18, 2013 3:55 am

Debb - it's already fixed.

KuuKiir - I very much intend for her to look evil and stuck-up. Now I know it's working. =]
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