Light source on a base help?

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Light source on a base help?

Post by Blu » Fri May 22, 2015 5:08 pm

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The pink is supposed to be the light source. I'm just trying to get a feel for if I'm getting it right so far, though any help on the chest/stomach would be appreciated as well. Referenced from SenshiStock.
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Re: Light source on a base help?

Post by Phoenigette » Fri May 22, 2015 5:29 pm

Where is the light supposed to be coming from? Directly from the side or more of the front/side?
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Re: Light source on a base help?

Post by Blu » Sat May 30, 2015 5:28 pm

Oh man. I'm terrible at light source. I guess front/side.
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Re: Light source on a base help?

Post by Phoenigette » Sat May 30, 2015 6:39 pm

you seem to be doing alright on the arms and legs, but i think the chest is wrong. I can't tell what kind of chest you're going for yet, so that part's pretty sketchy lol.

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