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Pixel High School Pageant - WIP! - Can be closed!

Post by Lilly » Sun Nov 08, 2015 6:12 pm

So yeah, I kinda stalled, putting this pageant off, and now I'm rushing to get it done. I entered this more for giggles and to relax after entering NTD, but it's not as relaxing as I hoped it would be. More like frustrating. Haha!

Anywho, here is my WIP! Feel free to tear her apart, all CC is welcomed. Be as harsh as you want, I'm here to learn. :P

This is my Lilly character, when she was a teen, and yeah, she's supposed to be angsty, grumpy and all that jazz. Take her out of the woods, force her to mingle with stupid people, and this is what you get. For her portrait I imagined the photographer saying things like "Come on, give me your best princess smile!" and Lilly is like "Princess smile, you want a princess smile? Alright right, I'll give you the best darned smile I can muster." :evil:

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Removed the headgear, school is bad enough without the extra bullying!
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Changed her colors a whee tad, changed her shoes to boots, and added a headband. Still shading her, not quite done yet!
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Erased bag, and redrew it. Fixed blush according to Batgirl's suggestion.
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Shaded the sweater, dress and shaded boots.
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Last edited by Lilly on Mon Nov 09, 2015 5:26 pm, edited 6 times in total.
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Re: Pixel High School Pageant - WIP!

Post by batgirl » Sun Nov 08, 2015 10:58 pm

that silky luminous hair :heart: I wish I had hair like that.
for CC: her eyes seem to have disappeared in the fill doll, looks like there are only the whites left. The bag I think should be resting more on her side than sticking out under her elbow. The portrait is wonderful, but bring the blush down so far on her cheeks, gives her the look of blushing or rosacia (or acne le gasp) rather than a healthy glow. I would go back to the blusher 2 above before the glasses change, that looks nice and healthy.
I love the sass and the beautiful colours. Keep going
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Re: Pixel High School Pageant - WIP!

Post by Lilly » Mon Nov 09, 2015 12:19 am

@Batgirl: Yay, thank you! Will put your CC to good use. I've probably missed the deadline, but I'm determined to finish it regardless. lol XD
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Re: Pixel High School Pageant - WIP!

Post by mokia » Mon Nov 09, 2015 12:21 am

Since my "Sunday" isn't over until I got to bed Mon morning, you've got.... 11ish hours left. XD

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Post by Lilly » Mon Nov 09, 2015 12:29 am

@Mokia: Hooray for Mondays! Thank you Mokia! <3
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Re: Pixel High School Pageant - WIP! - Can be closed!

Post by batgirl » Mon Nov 09, 2015 11:13 pm

Shes wonderful! good job!!
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