MDE Bosnia & Herzegovina

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Re: MDE Bosnia & Herzegovina

Post by Tals » Thu Mar 17, 2016 12:49 pm

Thanks guys! <3
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Here's what I've got now for her hair. Does it make sense?

(also...she's going to have red shoes eventually, I just ran out of steam =/)
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Re: MDE Bosnia & Herzegovina

Post by LtSheesha » Thu Mar 17, 2016 8:30 pm

That hair is adorable; I love it!

Face is looking a bit off to me; she looks really grouchy (which you might be okay with), and the jawline and proportions don't seem to quite match round one.

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Re: MDE Bosnia & Herzegovina

Post by Tals » Thu Apr 28, 2016 12:58 pm

I am SUPER BEHIND, y'all.
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That's what I have for her formal. Does this look...architecture-y? Does it need more? Does it make sense at all? I think I've been staring at it for way too long.
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I'm using the interior and exterior of Vijećnica as my inspo.
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Re: MDE Bosnia & Herzegovina

Post by Keke » Thu Apr 28, 2016 11:44 pm

It looks architecture-y to me. She love how she looks so far.

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Re: MDE Bosnia & Herzegovina

Post by Dragyn » Sun May 01, 2016 5:29 pm

Ugh. *throws in towel* Dem folds, dat pallet. You're doing fabulous. Now go do a crappy bull fighter so I have a chance, woman. Love it <3

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Re: MDE Bosnia & Herzegovina

Post by Phoenigette » Mon May 02, 2016 10:24 am

yes! more of that yellow! so happy. i can see the inspiration from your architecture in your dress, but also feel like you could put in more details if you wanted.
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Re: MDE Bosnia & Herzegovina

Post by Caitlincaitiecait » Mon May 02, 2016 2:26 pm

I totally see the architecture inspiration in the top of her dress, but not so much in the skirt. You could let the top part shine though, allowing the skirt to just flow. Currently the flow of the skirt is shaded in a really lovely way, but the sides of it are really straight and stiff, which doesn't seem to match up with the almost chiffon texture you've shaded it with. She's looking really good, keep it up!
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