pumpkin princess wip: Updated~

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pumpkin princess wip: Updated~

Postby phoeberose » Tue Sep 20, 2016 12:06 pm

a little something im working on~
its far from done & still pretty rough around the edges but i felt the need to share with you all. ;u; <3
cc is welcome. :>
base is my own Dreamy base~

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Re: pumpkin princess wip

Postby AxxKat » Tue Sep 20, 2016 3:52 pm

niether your profile pic or the wip is showin up! :(

(admittedly i'm super bummed cause i was really excited to see what you're workin on <3 )
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Re: pumpkin princess wip

Postby phoeberose » Tue Sep 20, 2016 5:07 pm

oh no i see that what happened D:
ima fix this :<
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Re: pumpkin princess wip

Postby phoeberose » Tue Sep 20, 2016 5:14 pm

okie its showing up now~ hopefully it doesnt decide to dissapear again ; w ;
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Re: pumpkin princess wip

Postby Consonanta » Tue Sep 20, 2016 10:19 pm

; __ ; I love your style with all of my heart, especially the crisp precision of your line work. This is so, so, so cute, and I cannot wait to see its final form! I adore the gradient you applied to the pumpkin.
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Re: pumpkin princess wip

Postby phoeberose » Wed Sep 21, 2016 1:32 pm

Omg Consanata thank you so much u just melted me ; - ; <3
i had such a hard time with that pumpkin i dont know why but yes that gradient ; w ;
really threw the whole idea of it trying to be a pumpkin together :< LOL *& my perfectionism wont allow it to not match her dress u.u* hehe
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Re: pumpkin princess wip

Postby phoeberose » Thu Oct 06, 2016 10:40 pm

am. making. progress! D:
i wanted to give her a mess of frizzy pigtails but. idk how to shade frizzy hair ; - ;
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Re: pumpkin princess wip: Updated~

Postby Phoenigette » Fri Oct 07, 2016 8:27 am

aww this is looking so cute. I would make the three sections of her bangs uneven, though, more like in the sketch to the left. Right now they are razor straight and it's eye catching. love how her hair turned out!
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Re: pumpkin princess wip: Updated~

Postby phoeberose » Fri Oct 07, 2016 3:14 pm

thank you phoenigette!~ <3
i fixed the bangs on the big one~
idk which one i like more tho D;;
i started messing with the contrast & have a more dingy pastelish one & the original & im so conflicted -_-

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Re: pumpkin princess wip: Updated~

Postby phoeberose » Wed Oct 12, 2016 2:10 pm

a lil more progress & i have no clue whatsoever where this is going now ; w ;
lie it started as such a brilliant cute idea & now... :C
anyways, not sure which i like better, with lace on the sleeves... or without... >.<
& ofc the color changed... again ; w ;</3
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Re: pumpkin princess wip: Updated~

Postby Oh-My-Stars » Wed Oct 12, 2016 6:06 pm

phoeberose wrote:a lil more progress & i have no clue whatsoever where this is going now ; w ;
lie it started as such a brilliant cute idea & now... :C
anyways, not sure which i like better, with lace on the sleeves... or without... >.<
& ofc the color changed... again ; w ;</3
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Omg she is super adorable. I really love what you have so far. I think the sleeve with lace looks lovely. My vote is to keep it. The colors are perfect. I like that they are more muted now because it draws attention to her pretty eyes.
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Re: pumpkin princess wip: Updated~

Postby phoeberose » Wed Oct 12, 2016 8:32 pm

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phoeberose wrote:a lil more progress & i have no clue whatsoever where this is going now ; w ;
lie it started as such a brilliant cute idea & now... :C
anyways, not sure which i like better, with lace on the sleeves... or without... >.<
& ofc the color changed... again ; w ;</3
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Omg she is super adorable. I really love what you have so far. I think the sleeve with lace looks lovely. My vote is to keep it. The colors are perfect. I like that they are more muted now because it draws attention to her pretty eyes.

thank you tasha :D <3
i will say this is probably the most difficult pixel ive done yet -_-
i have a idea & then an idea that clashes with that idea & just so may ideas i dont know what to do anymore ; w ; LOL
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Re: pumpkin princess wip: Updated~

Postby Oh-My-Stars » Fri Oct 14, 2016 1:31 am

You're doing great so far. I really love it. I understand how you feel. My ideas always go through a ton of changes too. My roughs look crazy and all over the place.

But really she is just darling so far. <3
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Re: pumpkin princess wip: Updated~

Postby Phoenigette » Fri Oct 14, 2016 12:42 pm

She looks great so far! My one criticism is that I think you should remove the gradient on the pumpkin now. Originally it was for balance on the overall image but with the desaturation to brown and her boots, I think you have the covered.
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Re: pumpkin princess wip: Updated~

Postby phoeberose » Tue Oct 18, 2016 10:12 pm

Phoenigette wrote:She looks great so far! My one criticism is that I think you should remove the gradient on the pumpkin now. Originally it was for balance on the overall image but with the desaturation to brown and her boots, I think you have the covered.

i thought something was off, thank you for pointing that out!
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im this far now... messed with her boots, added a scarf & hair accessories~
gettig closer to finishing the actual doll & geting onto the background! ;U; <3
not sureif ilike the pumpin blossoms or the bows better....
like the bows match her whole outfit better but the pumpkin blossoms kinda put the "pumpkin" theme more together. or just add the blossoms into the background later.~
i also wanna do somethingwith skulls as well. ; w ;
i miss the simpler days. u.u LOL
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Re: pumpkin princess wip: Updated~

Postby Phoenigette » Thu Oct 20, 2016 3:42 pm

I like the ribbons better. I think you could put the blossoms in the background nicely if you needed more pumpkin.
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