Well it sure has been awhile....

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Well it sure has been awhile....

Postby Aiyanna » Tue Jul 09, 2013 2:05 pm

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...But I somehow managed to mess around with MS Paint and get this. Not thrilled, not displeased...just kinda meh!

Base by Tenchibaka and Aerieyena

Constructive criticism welcomed!
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Thank you to Santa's Helper and Anna Bee for these two little ones! Bases are from here http://freezerpop.atwebpages.com and from here http://www.disappeared.de
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Re: Well it sure has been awhile....

Postby Parker » Tue Jul 09, 2013 6:31 pm

The base is by Aerieyena and Tenchibaka. It was part of a base edit contest and the rules state that you have to credit both of them.

It looks pretty good. I like the colour combo and the outfit design. I think the shading on her pants is too soft compared to the rest of the doll. It may be my monitor but I have a hard time seeing it there. Loving those boots and the top :D
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Re: Well it sure has been awhile....

Postby Phoenigette » Sun Jul 28, 2013 11:45 am

The shading on her bust turned out very well. I also like the shape of her pants a lot. I agree with parker that they could use more contrast. Also, i would bring her sash down further around her hips. That's mostly preference though :)
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Re: Well it sure has been awhile....

Postby lemonPencil » Mon Jul 29, 2013 6:12 pm

I really like the bodice and the belt scarf. Only criticism I can really come up with is maybe have the lineart for her hair a darker colour? But that is mainly a style preference for me, I like dark lines.
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Re: Well it sure has been awhile....

Postby MalevolentMask » Wed Jul 31, 2013 10:03 pm

I really love the outfit on this! She looks so gypsy and elf-like its pretty sweet! :D

I feel like the line section of this topic may help you. There are also other tips and tricks on that forum that I find useful. PixelJoint knows their stuff.

I can't wait to see more from you! \o/
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