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here, I had to open it up to figure out a way to smooth it out xD

First of, I adjusts the highlights, the 3rd from the bottom was to thin and to long to match with the other ones well, then I brought the shadows up further, and then added a 3rd layer of shadows from the pallet you already had, then to make it even smoother I added a darkest shadow taken from the lineart of the skin xD;; I didn't do a perfect job with it but it gets the idea down.
but anyways what I am trying to show is, they less open space of a color there is between the transactions from one color to the next as you get darker the smoother the whole thing looks
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by the way, sorry if my c/c sounds harsh, all in all, I think it looks great, i'm just knit picking out every flaw and trying to teach you ways to fix them ^^;

First of, I adjusts the highlights, the 3rd from the bottom was to thin and to long to match with the other ones well, then I brought the shadows up further, and then added a 3rd layer of shadows from the pallet you already had, then to make it even smoother I added a darkest shadow taken from the lineart of the skin xD;; I didn't do a perfect job with it but it gets the idea down.
but anyways what I am trying to show is, they less open space of a color there is between the transactions from one color to the next as you get darker the smoother the whole thing looks
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by the way, sorry if my c/c sounds harsh, all in all, I think it looks great, i'm just knit picking out every flaw and trying to teach you ways to fix them ^^;






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I would suggest bringing up that 3rd from the bottom highlight probably 4 or 5 more pixels, but that aside I think it looks great






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i'f bring the shadows up a little bit on that one part but after that I don't notice anything else
I personally prefer the wide hipped version, this is a very stylized doll and it looks strange with the narrower hips
I personally prefer the wide hipped version, this is a very stylized doll and it looks strange with the narrower hips






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I personally like the green more, though it looks a bit unbalanced, perhaps you could add a small hair clip?






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